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Summer Duff
summeyduff@aol.com
I go out with my friends on Friday night and get drunk sometimes, which let me have sleepless nights, but I still pursue my dream.
- Jacksonville, Florida
- Joined November 2023
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- Lovers and admirers
- Some people like to write, so they become writers. Of course, there are many connections between writers and readers, and some of them become writers' admirers, and others became rivals.
- Once, a writer said at a party that he always wrote down what he encountered, it was like writing a diary, and over time, the things he wrote became more and more exciting, because they were telling interesting stories. When a young man asked the writer what the characteristics of his writing were, the writer said that the characteristics of his writing were expressed in vague ways. He liked to be unpredictable. He said it was the same as falling in love, when a person meets another person he likes, he doesn't know what will happen in the future. He just likes that person. The writer also said that when he writes, he will try to highlight the little things. In the details of his writing, there are many small things in life. When he enters the next stage, the devilish part of his work is revealed.
- At this time, the young man told the writer that he admired his writing method. He also said that he had fantasies and wanted to find an ideal lover. The writer listened to the man and felt that the man was a bit like him at the time, because he had also fantasied and wanted to find an ideal lover, but he failed in the end. However, since the man admires his writing style, and he has fantasies and passions like he did, he wants to help him. But this time he didn't want the man to make the same mistakes, and he didn't want him to fail in love. He wanted him to realize his fantasy, so he told the man that he was willing to help him, but before that, the man had to sign a contract and do it his way, the man listened to the writer and said to him that it's all right, so he signed the contract.
- One day, the man told the writer that he had gained the favor of a woman according to his description. Then, he started to have sex with his girlfriend in the cabin, where he found that his girlfriend admired him and made a loud noise, so he heard his girlfriend said to him: Whenever he likes to have sex, she will never get tired of it. The writer listened to the boy and told him that all the things he encountered had been written in the work. When the man asked the writer: Did he use all sorts of little things gained the woman's favor and those little things were also in the work? The writer said, yes.
- At this time, the man's eyes reappeared what he and his girlfriend were making love, and he heard his girlfriend make a loud noise, says to him: Whenever he likes sex, she never tires of it. So he asks the writer: If he and his girlfriend are having sex in the cabin, is this the devil part of the work? The writer said that all the details and the devilish parts mentioned by the man have been written in the work. The writer also said that he used to write some diaries, where there are men's fantasies and women's adventures. Now since the man likes what he writes he can adapt what happened in the man's life into a script. As for the man, just does as the script says.
- After listening to the writer's words, the man admires him even more, because he helped him realize his fantasy, and found an ideal lover. So he told the writer that he would definitely do as he wrote in the script, and he would not be disappointed. At this time the writer said to himself that this confirmed the feasibility of his theory, because last time he made a man have a fantasy and did a lot of absurd things. Now there is another man who admires him and is willing to do as he writes, which can further confirm his theory. But this time he really wants to help him. He doesn't want him to make the kind of mistakes he made; he wants him to be successful in love. When the man follows what he wrote in the script, he first highlighted his advantages to the girl, made her feel good about him, and then showed the devil part, and he was very proud when he had sex with his girlfriend in the hut, because this was exactly what he had experienced before with his lover. Now it reappeared on the man. At this time, he breathed a sigh of relief and poured himself a glass of wine.
- One day, the writer heard the man say on the phone that he had met a rival in love. At this time, the writer told the man that he did not need to be panic because he could modify the script. He would let the man defeat his rival. The man listened the writer's words and said to him that in this case, he is more confident, because he is really enjoying the best time in his life. However, the man soon found out that the rival had moved to his next door and became his neighbor. At this time, the man investigated the neighbor. When he found out that his girlfriend had many people pursuing her before he knew her, one of them was the rival. So, the writer told the man that since the neighbor was his rival, he must have a little admiration for him, because the man defeated the neighbor. The writer also said that in future scripts, he will add some descriptions of rivals and admirers, and let the man defeat the rival.
- After listening to the writer's words, the man felt that the neighbor was no longer a threat. On the contrary, he thought it was very interesting, because the neighbor was both his rival and his admirer, so the man was a little proud, because he wanted to see how this show ending. But the man also found that the neighbor was always watching them, because when he and his girlfriend went in and out, they often met his rival.
- One day, he was dancing with his girlfriend in a bar, and then he found that his girlfriend was very sexy because she is so radiant and dancing so charmingly that people can't take their eyes off her, and soon he finds that his rival is there, he even keeps staring at his girlfriend. Sometimes the rival seems to be obsessed with his girlfriend and wanted to rush up and hug her, thinking of kissing her desperately. But he still ignored his rival as usual. When he got home, he and his girlfriend made love right away. Naturally, his girlfriend made a loud noise again, and said to him: Whenever he likes to have sex, she will never get tired of it. At this time, the man feels that his rival is listening to next door.
- When he told all this to the writer, the writer said to him that he didn't have to care because he had already done what he wrote, that the man had told a wonderful story to his rival. In that story, there are devils and details, and his rival is probably still pondering how to find a flaw, so that he can take advantage of it. When the man has sex with his girlfriend again, he feels that his rival is a little unable to sit still, because he heard some noises from the next door. After that, whenever he and his girlfriend went out, they met the rival, because the rival seemed to be watching their every move. At this time, the man said to himself that the rival was not his opponent at all, nor was he at all knowing the details written by the writer, let alone those things have become a script, and the neighbor is probably also a character in the script.
Jack Smith
Love the story and hope more to come.
Ted Douglas
Very well written and very interesting story and hope more to come.
Greg Hamilton
Great story and want to read more!
Mark William
Very interesting story and want to read more!
Matt Wood
A great story and want more.
Kate Brown
Now we have talented writers who can let us enjoy life and feel lovers and admirers are both wonderful.
Joseph Clark
Yes, lovers and admirers are both great and we wait to see what happens next.
Paul Parker
Love the story and it shows that lovers and admirers can be both great because life itself is so rich and people can enjoy it.
Peter Price
Unpredictable, fall in love, fantasy, ideal lover, those are all fascinating things; and the story also let people know that there are details and devils in writing, and life is like a show, there are admirers, rivals, and when having sex, your lover might make a loud noise.
Heather Redman
A great story and love it! So, the writer is kind of God, who liked unpredictable, also, everything is written in the script, where the lovers and admirers act according to the script and the writer can change the script anytime if needs it, which is very cool.
Lisa Daniel
The story tells a unique situation where lovers and rivals are both great, because lovers tried their best, including making loud noise when having sex, and the rival is the one let the story going forward, which is also great.
Tim Swann
Great story and really love it.
Andrew Christy
I love the story because it shows that when there is a lover, there is a person who is admirer but also a competitor.
Daniel Frick
So interesting and wish more to come.
Lance Clark
Very creative, well done short story!
Pat Davis
A story that let many people think a lot of things.
Ali Turner
Lovers and admirers make reading short story a happy moment!
Emily Hill
A great story!
Katherine Boston
Very interesting story and hope more to come.